Weather writing
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
Me and my family went to this big park l
see flowers everywhere l feel very hot it was
sunny i taste the sun burning my mouth i smell
smoke from the barbecue I hear people laughing
i can tell you it was a hot day i was sweating
form how hot it was bye.
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